A superpowered teenage thief needs to return a stolen suitcase before the mafia realizes it's gone. Average Chapter Length: 1000 words Updates every monday.
A superpowered teenage thief needs to return a stolen suitcase before the mafia realizes it's gone. Average Chapter Length: 1000 words Updates every monday.
so i have read 2 chapters so far, i know it is not enough to make a review yet, since the story is still new, but i kind of like it.
I do like how the story was written, it is really comedic and it is a good way, i have a fun and entertaining time reading it.
However, some parts of the story it a bit hard to read and sometimes confusing.
like the part where the stone ball turns into mud then into a tsunami. I can see where the author is trying to do it, but it is hard to understand why it happened.
Since it is not like the Stone Ball it's that big to the point it can create such a thing, but then again, it was funny.
and also how each person interacts with each other and how the author gives each of them a somewhat unique identity from the other.
well as for as i see that it.
I will definitely read the story further since I want to find out what the deal with the blue bag is, and know how the writing was going so far. I bet once Cake opened the bag it was funny as hell.
anyway really love the first two chapter, good job author 5 star for you and i hope your next chapter will be out soon!
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